Reviews per Offer
By Reviewer jirvin on February 5, 2019 at 11:25 AM
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Official HPG Team Feedback. Thank you for the well-written offer. Please see our questions and comments below.
Reference Fire Admin – Why are the items listed as R&R there not included in this Logistics Division BFO?
Re: the metrics, they could be improved. suggest maybe add one or two, make them quantifiable, and have them relate to some overarching, multi-year plan for assuring the equipment that is needed is in good condition and available for saving lives.
Not enough information to rate the performance measure section. Also, in the final submission a welcome addition to this request would be a breakdown of fuel, equipment, personnel costs, etc. R&R was listed under Fire Administration. I think an attachment with more information about expenses may enhance this request.
Please breakdown the 330,372 increase. Also is personnel change increase for new position or personnel related increases?
I need more information regarding a $330,372 increase from previous year? Is any of this captured in the Fire Administration Offer #11578?
Need measures to support request? This unit is responsible for readiness of equipment and facilities. Surely there are metrics that can be made here.