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By Reviewer on February 8, 2019 at 5:26 PM
|4: Good||4: Good||2: Needs improvement||2: Needs improvement||4: Good|
Much of the narrative is quite similar to the main fire prevention offer. The tangible benefits of this offer are not clear. It appears adding two full time fire inspectors is expected to result in 10 more inspections per year (5/new inspector), ten fewer fires and no additional public education events. This seems like small return for the investment.
Consider combining the request with the main fire prevention offer (recommended) or better stating specifically how these two new positions would be used and clearly stating the outcomes of just these two inspectors in this offer (if you really want to keep them separate).